Theres no way this was made that long ago wow
sure there is... it was. :3
Very poorly written
hotdiggitydemon did it first.
you stopped at 1.5?
nice but frustrating when i cant get somthing fast enough
I hate how i have to click right on dougs head to hit him... GRRR!!!
Yo dawg youre getting raped by 0 bombers idk why
This is great, but whose been 0 bombing?
I wanted to make a more in depth review because I still felt bad :(
I think I'll start off with stuff that I think needs improvement.
-The beginning (At least up to 0:45) starts slow, with repeating tracks that don't really progress, they kind of just move laterally throughout the song. There's also a lack on complexion, but it's still not bad
-Starting at (0:45) Start a beat/DnB drop, with sounds really weird, like you inverted your drums, they just feel like they're in the wrong place. The lack of complexion continues.
-1:45 Only really 2 instruments, and then a pause without not a lot of buildup beforehand
-2:30 Feels likes a copy paste from earlier
-2:50 Loses the good rhythm from 1:40 :( Goes back to something not so great
-Overall, I would say it's leaning more twords Dubstep with Copy and Paste, the only part I really feel can be more DnB is the fact that you didn't resort to truely grit junkyard basses. Thank you.
-The bass the starts around 1:40 is really cool, and the beat fixes itself there too
-The instruments you made overall are very nice
-The ending and middle pick up the rest of the song
-Lack of instruments can also be a good thing in this case
I will give it around 6 out of 10, it has it's elements, but you're not at that 10k hours level yet haha
Thanks for the review, man! Always good to get a nice, lengthy critique every now and then! I guess I'll take some time to try and address some of the things you mentioned since you took the time to point 'em out :)
The pattern I used for the drums isn't actually that uncommon to hear in a Drum and Bass track. However, if you think it sounds weird, that's totally fair - it has that sort of "off beat" feel to it - which, personally, I love :3 You also mentioned that at 1:45 there are only "two instruments", which I can honestly say is not right at all... Haha, there are numerous layers of basses, sub basses, kicks, snares and cymbals playing. Just because it doesn't complex doesn't mean it isn't. You did even say yourself, "lack of instruments can be a good thing" - so I guess you get what I'm saying ;)
Those are really the only thing I wanted to address. I don't agree with everything, but for the most part, I do! And that's fine, it's impossible to get good reviews all the time! Reviews like yours keep me on my toes... Haha!
Thanks again for the review, man - always appreciated!
why so many 5 stars? This isnt even good
This is the point where you know you have a deluded fan base
Probably the coolest piece you've done
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